@At Long Last
great flow, good dm's
Your movement from 625-590 is unattractive. I'm 90% sure that it's because of your chest rotations.
That arm dm at the end looked impressive. I like how you sent the arm airborne then launched up to break it in 1 fluid motion. I was a little bummed when I realized that your kick only dm'ed the elbow, but it's understandable. Your landing after that was ok. That should have been the end of the replay.
The only thing I felt that you should have left out entirely was that skeet. It looked like an afterthought. It was really unimpressive—your target was stationary on the ground, only 4 feet away, and you had to make your skeet hand grab+ungrab uke's neck to make it actually dm. Your tori's movement wasn't good during the skeet either. The transition to the end pose was eh.
Despite that, I really liked your replay. There were things in there that I haven't done before or probably can't do.
good job :>