@raaage: I improved my dm's with this new replay, and my pose was quite good id say. enjoy (:

@marrez: Thanks, my landing/posing is slowing getting better. Although it's hard adjusting to the -9 gravity. Still improving (:

Opener was genericish

The little spin could have been done better, it looked a little awkward and twitchy

Lift was great but I don't like how you spun Uke the other way afterwards

Manip after that was alright, was slightly twitchy though

Boom looked weak

I liked the little lift of Uke's upper body after you landed

Boom was cool but it was messy as hell, plus you ghosted

Transition to pose was nice.