Toribash
opener was just as good as usual, also with your characteristic style, but the transition that happens between frame 350 to 280 (more or less) was a bit off imo.
The double hip dm was insane but the form wasnt as good as it could be and afterwards you rotated your chest in the opposite side of your flow to grab uke's arm, which I personally dont like. I would suggest you to keep your chest in default rotation (neutral) and hold it while in situations like frame 250 so, even if you still want to rotate your chest in the opposite side, it wont look as bad and barely noticeable.
Everything else was cool but nothing special about it too.

Good job overall
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I watched "Gunshots" and "Bolt", and both is ok, but in my mind you need to work on your openers, they looks not so good, not so bad. I mean, you got the flow, boomhits, but openersAWWWWW.

Gunshot, 8.3/10

Bolt, 7.7/10
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