Originally Posted by
iNoTo
Made another change :
You made the text almost unreadable with the extra brightness
. As I've just said to Lilmali, you've really over-done the brightness, you've taken a potentially vibrant colour scheme and washed it out and made it look pale with the large amounts of brightness.
Also similar to Lilmalli's sig, I'm not keen on your lighting. I'm not really a fan of having a light source in the middle of the tag in general unless it is executed properly. It would have been executed fairly well if it wasn't for the drop shadow on the text :P. Correct me if I'm wrong here but the direction that light is hitting the text from is like this \. If so, then the shadow should be on the other side?
If you aren't going to create some sort of shadow for your render, then you shouldn't create a drop shadow for your text either. By doing that, you've pretty much made your text the focal point by placing it the furthest forward, if you get what I mean.
The sig could really do with more effects, it reminds me a lot of my more recent stuff, kind of dull with poor colours and a lack of anything interesting. Keep going though! I love the composition in your other sigs.
@Alpha: Named after your name on PR :P.