I feel like the O's are too big, also, the last part of the curtain on the left side seems flat, you made the seam in it to make it look like it's bending outwards like the others, but you did no shading on it.
Overall really great, nice idea.
[RAWR]SlipAnc: two girls, one Siku
[RAWR]Siku: I was talking about having dicks in my mouth
It's my school tagline :3
Since I've decided to make the Ferrock set my personal set. I edited the head, and soon the body, while doing that I got bored though, I made myself a ground text :3