Toribash

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i made for request, cnc
Last edited by toriabiz; Feb 4, 2012 at 03:06 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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The way you blended it doesn't work. It just looks weird.
The effects you have don't match the flow of the render.
Your lighting is too weak and needs a bluer color to match the lighting from the render. Though this render kinda sucks because there are multiple light sources.
Text placement is bad.

Keep it up though, you're getting better.
I would try different backgrounds first. Duplicate the render to hell and smudge it. Or another thing is take a picture that fits and put it behind everything.
Making a logo.

Wat


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Vog: Not a fan of the hair or the mouth, try giving them more definition or something. I'm not very good at head making..

Meap: That looks like the rim of a tire. It also looks like a G on the inside, rather than a C. Nice job aside from that. Also make it less edgy on the corners. Make it smooth.
Yeah, I'm not so good at hair making
I remember that wafflez give someone realistic hair tutorial in Art Thread, but I forgot Which Thread :P
Last edited by Enma; Feb 7, 2012 at 12:56 AM.