Toribash
Is someone actually good enough to CnC Swex? :o

I'll try my best >.<

@Swex v Daxx: Those were pretty smooth movements and attacks only thing is your momentum drops to zero after an attack, you know what I mean? It doesn't look pretty. it sometimes makes you look slow. and something else that I noticed in that spar is that the way you tried to gain momentum to do a kick at frame 800, it looks awkward... well for me idk with other people.

@NearlyDead: You attacks before the 1000th frame looks very awkward. it looks like you don't give it your all. don't pull your punches and kicks back too early. And the way you got dazed didn't look cool at all. If you go dazed you don't relax all but you relax most. get it? And the way you stood back up looked like you were a robot of some sort. Add more flow and some small flips or twists then your spars will look good. If I keep giving you tips you'll be better than me in no time >.>

Heres a spar with Obazu:
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Spar-Kicks vs Obazu 4.rpl (412.9 KB, 22 views)
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Gotkicks2
Gotkicks2, we really need to start a tradition.
Anyway, I'm going to make this as nitpicky as possible.
Oh my god, you missed that first punch, what a noob.
You made that flip look so awkward! Ugh! Disgusting!
Lol, Thousand Years of Death.
Oh god, you ruined it with that kick!
Why must you squat like that! looks like a constipated old man!
Last kick was shit.
-9999999999/10
Loser.
Alaistier Moderated Message:
Please give helpful criticism next time.
Last edited by Alaistier; Jun 11, 2012 at 04:32 PM.
wow that
sucked
Originally Posted by daxter99 View Post
Lol it's funny since everyone before sayd me to relax , anyways i'm new a sparring so i'm not going to CnC for now...
P.S. What spazzy means?

So ayone answering this^?
@Swex v Daxx: Those were pretty smooth movements and attacks only thing is your momentum drops to zero after an attack, you know what I mean? It doesn't look pretty. it sometimes makes you look slow. and something else that I noticed in that spar is that the way you tried to gain momentum to do a kick at frame 800, it looks awkward... well for me idk with other people.

my mommentum does drop to zero sometimes when i punch yes, but do you know why i do it and why you should?
because then you won't just be swinging around your arm one time, if you slow down your mommnetum you can actually do some combo and make it an interesting fight for both you and your opponent.

i never tried to gain mommentum, i just did an uppercut into a sweep sidekick, what would you have done in that sitiuation?
after dealing 3 punches i felt that it was good to mix it up with a 180 sweepkick.

thanks for the CnC but really not having mommentum is not a minus.
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and stop with the kindergarten fights guys, come on....
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Originally Posted by daxter99 View Post
So ayone answering this^?

if anyone sais that you're spazzy they mean that you are doing too many random twitches.
Last edited by Swexx; Jun 11, 2012 at 03:22 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Originally Posted by daxter99 View Post
Lol it's funny since everyone before sayd me to relax , anyways i'm new a sparring so i'm not going to CnC for now...
P.S. What spazzy means?

What I mean by Hold is, take it in moderation.
Don't be so overly stiff. once your... anything is in the right position,
Hold it there. For example, I like to hold my elbows at about a right angle,
doesn't look so awkward that way. Contract, then on the frame after that,
hold. Same goes for relaxing, take it in moderation.
wow that
sucked
Gotkicks:
Good balance in that replay until the end.
Good dodge of Ob's kick.
What you did after that was interesting, but at full speed, it looks believable. I like it.
Small jumpkick had a good landing.
You looked a bit stiff after that, though.
Then you threw your arms straight out strangely, and fell in an unrealistic fashion. The end just could've been better, and you have intermittent stiffness which will be eliminated with practice. Good spar.
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Here's LucianoWoW and I. Please C&C both of us. Thanks.
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Also, elbows at a right angle isn't "natural." From time to time, yes. Most of the time, though, no. It's all about the situation you're in.
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Oh, btw, I don't know what the fuck I was doing around frame 200. I was being derptastic.
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practice lucianowow.rpl (554.0 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by Alaistier; Jun 12, 2012 at 04:15 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Great movement.
Really liked the spin kicks you made.
And the 200 frame thing, looked really bad.
Spazzing out on the floor... Nah.
But its ok, since I also had that problem for about a month ago.
And the end, poses was great, but it could've been better if someone got KO'd.
Great replay overall, good flow, good balance, etc.



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#Hrs - [OS] The Monster.rpl (540.1 KB, 10 views)
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The movement was good.
I like the little turn around you did at about 770 frames,
Although the way that the spar turned out it seemed a bit awkward.
The kick could have been aimed better.
Didn't like the arm ghosting through your leg, though.
I'm sure that you could have put another step in there from that walk.
That would have been a cool kick, although his leg got in the way.
Okai turn around.
Twitchy pose, but that's okay in my eyes.
A selfspar wip coming soon.
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Spar with Uke WiP.rpl (134.2 KB, 6 views)
Uke WiP2.rpl (147.8 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by Nearly; Jun 14, 2012 at 02:31 PM.
wow that
sucked