#Garkin: I'd say no. Just look at his second replay.
I really enjoyed the second kick of ''immortal'', it flowed pretty well.
You could hit uke's legs before jumping imo, the jump was decant though.
The headkick looks stiff and You could have done some dm more on it.
The second replay was really bad imo. Stiff, slow and boring.
The two hits were really weak and the opener was boring and stiff.
I can't find anything good in this replay.
The third replay was really messy. You could have done some dm more in those hits, they look so weak. And the pose was unstable.