Originally Posted by Pulse
@Dialord: Your replays look too stiff imo.
The first replay was pretty bad, the decap was too stiff and the manipulation wasn't so good.
The second one has something good but it's not enough imo.
You had a nice idea at the end of the third replay but the first part was too slow and boring,
you could do something more in that second hit though.
@Erth: Not bad but it's not enough imo.
The walk in the first replay was decent but it'd be better if you did some dm more in that punch.
The second replay was a bit slow at the beginning, as i said for the previous replay the hits look too weak, after the first hit you could hit the legs (it would be better).
The only impressive thing was the boomhit in the third replay but when you felt you could hit the legs and do another boom.
These are my opinions, i'm not a recruiter so these aren't official reviews.
I fully agree with you Pulse. I think it's a no, both of you.
Thanks for applying though. Come back in a week or two with new replays.
Cheers!
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Originally Posted by Dialord
I try and try ^^
please watch this ^^
thanks
You obviously didn't hear me. I said come back in a week or two after some practise! Seriously, if you don't practise, you won't improve. If you're not improving, then you'll end up facing rejection for the same reason over and over again. Please give it some time man, patience is a virtue.
As for the replays, I only liked the second one. Very stylish, but you used a somewhat simple opener. The other two replays were nothing special. Slightly stiff and kinda slow. It's a no. Now please, take your time and improve before re-applying. Don't re-apply tomorrow, there's no way you'll improve enough to make a visible difference in your replays in one day.
Thank you for applying and sorry if I sound like an ass.
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