Toribash
If thats better?
Dude thats beautiful, but I didnt like it when you contracted your hip.

9.5/10

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(This work is still not finished) Im looking if I should change the way I hit or not.
Because I see it a bit messy in the second hit.
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Oc35 - Final Punch.rpl (287.2 KB, 22 views)
RIP [duck] Aug 28 2011 - April 20 2020
Well watching the replay without pausing those upper body dms looked good, but with shift+p it looked messy, grabby ( I was disappointed to see that you grab-dm ) and really not that great. The upperbody dm needs a rework




And here's my new replay
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That looks like a replay I would make :P you moved like a ninja 8/10
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Yeah I like this replay I made
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http://made4you.on.toribash.com

:D click it and make me happy :D
The opener its very simple and I didnt like that last jump, not very realistic...
BUT the speed, the aim and thows dms were awesome. Nice replay.
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largekilla - little wing.rpl (237.2 KB, 22 views)
That was good, but it was slow. The hits were really good.
It would of been better if you gained more speed. The boomhits were great
Good Job
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Do I need more powerful hits? Please Help
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Mad Drawing.rpl (187.6 KB, 17 views)
RIP [duck] Aug 28 2011 - April 20 2020
YES. answer in caps should say enough :[



Also never got some good cnc on this replay so I'm hopint to get now ;u

P.S.: my first attempt at the peniscap resulted in a self-4dm hit haha
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#zalmoxis - I live my Death.rpl (183.5 KB, 17 views)
You only asked if you needed more powerful hits... If you wanted proper cnc DON'T ask for something else in your post.

But alright:

The first part up to the first kick was pretty nicely done, it did well to lead up to a good replay. However the hits were terribly weak, could have been aimed better, and the replay was too grabby. I also don't like it when uke is so asymetrically dismembered, it looks a bit ugly at the end.

Overall if you want a good replay then remake it from the first kick ( including that one)