Toribash
Fff*ck wait...I'm FIX it
damn bug
now cnc
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Last edited by 1TheV; Jun 6, 2012 at 05:45 AM.
See my mug , it'll probably turn the flowers black
I thought the flow was amazing, so I'll give that a 9/10.
The kicks and twists were pretty cool too, so that gets a 8.5/10
The pose I think could of been a bit better, in someway. I guess maybe if you edited it a bit more, he could be crouching or sitting. so 7.5/10

Overall, it was good. 8.5/10.

If anyone has the time, can you CnC mine? This one was unfinished, because I had to leave, and I was too lazy to edit it so it would look like an actual spar.
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spar with brad.rpl (279.0 KB, 5 views)
[Hunters], [RSO], and [Anime United]! I AM BACK FROM HIATUS
Advice, as promised:
Hold your neck.
Let your shoulders be more towards the middle, not always so up or down.
When your ghost has a move, go through with it and make edits so it looks better. Don't change your mind midway through a move.
When you kick, don't extend, space, contract. It looks spazzy. Instead, use relax after the kick so it flows more smoothly into place.
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quick spar with andrew. I improvised a run that I thought was rather sexy.
Also, a cute pose. ;)
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Last edited by Alaistier; Jun 8, 2012 at 02:58 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
1st- it's obvious I'd get my ass kicked.
2nd- sorry for what happened to my walk, meh I just felt like it.
Last edited by Alaistier; Jun 9, 2012 at 04:01 PM.
Do you really think you're in control
Listen.
I'm the owner of this org, so I know what I'm doing. I C&C'd the replay above mine, as stated in the rules.
No shit I didn't C&C yours; I wasn't posting a replay, I was telling you to follow the thread rules.

Go to the first fucking page and read them.

Otherwise, don't post here. I'm tired of having to tell people the same shit over and over.
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You're a teacher, for fuck's sake, you should know what you're doing.
Last edited by Alaistier; Jun 10, 2012 at 03:13 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump