The dance had some nice headspins but the stuff afterwards was strange.
The headpass was rather impressive. Nograb headpassing is nice, but your movement looked rather unorganised and ugly.
miros you traversed over the obstacles pretty quickly but again, the movements looked somewhat ugly.
Overall, your replays get good results (nograb passes, far distance travelled), but your movements just look strange. I'd think you're very close to getting. Try again in about a week or two.