thank you drake, the story was about a legend, about us. the story is a legend you see, and I added no names to keep people happy. I see it as a brilliantly twisted story, no other clan has stories like this (correct me if I'm wrong) that was true story writing from the heart (even if its a bit dark). I haven't put your story down in anyway nadie, I respect your style of writing, I hope you got a clear image of my story and a full understanding of my writing ability. thanks for reading it.