Originally Posted by k6vamees

That's kind of sad, but up to you. The story won't suffer for it, but i knew you could make it more graphic than it sounds ;d Anyway since i saw there wasn't much progress going on here, i took some of my free time and tried to do the first chapter. So feast your eyes on this, feel free to do some slight corrections ofc. Including that fish part if someone doesn't want him included still (he hasn't responded to my pm so i guess he doesn't give a damn). The "//" is where i continued on from carey's last post. You can add some funny hints and so on make it fun.

Chapter1(a): Intro/snake

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Chapter 1(a): intro/snake

Once upon a time, in a galaxy not so far away, a man laid resting. His fondness of nature had brought him to the jungle, but there was something unnerving and sinister about his appearance. He seemed to be on edge, as if he were ready for a beast to jump out of the trees at any moment. To the average eye he looked defenseless, but upon closer inspection his callused hand was mere inches away from his bloodstained Bowie knife.// It was night-time, as he had been wandering through the thickness of the forest, filled with all sorts of odd creatures. Much he thought of his own past as he tried to rest, unsucceedingly so. Wasn't much for him to think about though, as his appearance would tell most about him, the look of a soldier. Old, worn-out and gaunt-like. He wore an old duster coat from the old days of service. He also had a bandana and an eyepatch, which made him look vulnerable, which would fool most of his opponents. He has a history of long gay servitude in the gay military service until he went gay rogue after a gay uprising that had occurred among his fellow homosexual gay soldiers. He had been on the run ever since, looking for a change of pace, another way to pass the day. He had been a crazy man-lover back then, but since his skills were out of practice, due to his long journey, he stole a some wonderfully graphic homosexual tentacle porn comics from the headquarters. The jungle was pretty quiet that night, but the world altogether was in peril, threatened to be dominated by Fish the legged whaledemon and his hellish minions. Countless dominions were falling under his rule as there were none strong enough to oppose his power. And so he continued to ravage, with his power unchecked, and unchallenged.
Snake had set up a small fire close to him, to keep him warm as he tried to rest from his journey. He was looking at his comics, thought they'd help him get some shut-eye. "Aw hell yeah, meatballs.. Never gets old.." In the meanwhile, something was moving in the forest. Moonlight slightly reflected this suspicious creatures' metallic carapace, which made snake notice its presence. Suddenly the fire went out in a moments notice and snake found himself in a vulnerable position, staring at a pair of blue, intimidatingly glowing eyes. His freakish, awkward rest, had been interrupted...

There is another way to get things moving here. The first 11 chapters obviously represent the appearance of a new character. So the chapter in which the member is mentioned (i.e. next up is william) can do the next chapter (I can help if i'm available). Here's an updated list of the main story progression so you get what i mean:

Story progression, Episode I

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EPISODE I: "Birth of the fellowship"

Chapters a: World intro mixed with snake traveling/fighting etc
Chapters (char. names): Snake finds his companions through all kinds of different situations, who later choose to follow him, may be for varying reasons and whatnot.

Chapter 1a: Intro/snake
Chapter 2a: William
Chapter 3a: Deprav
Chapter 4a: Smogard49/Bojan
Chapter 5a: Deuteria

/end fl0w line

Chapters b: Meanwhile, a new environment. k6vamees begins to travel/fights etc. descriptions.
Chapters (char. names): k6vamees finds his companions through all kinds of different situations, who later choose to follow him, may be for varying reasons and whatnot. Runs in parallel with snake's story.

Chapter 6b: k6vamees
Chapter 7b: Slycooper
Chapter 8b: Kickass
Chapter 9b: Rcarey
Chapter 10b: Killer
Chapter 11b: Xhiba

/end RA line

Chapter 12: RA and fl0w first encounter*

* At this point we can create a conflict or not between the two factions if we want before or once they meet each other, or have Fish involved with it. Idk, We'll see///

Chapter 13: RA and fl0w part ways/or join up

, then episode II and III but we'll get there.