That opener has been used so many times, try to be original. At 460 you made a giant move with a really slow build up causing it to look extremely twitchy. The kick was alright but a back kick + a grab is quite a large amount of force to only get a couple DMs making it look a tad weak. Try to avoid being attacked by flying limbs such as at 353 when you were being brutally beaten by your arm. You tend to hit and re-pull him in for another hit when you could have a lot more fluidity in your movements if you replace the initial grab with an actual hit. I cant stress being original enough, try not to make a typical kick kick boom replay.
