Originally Posted by
TiffTron
hmmmm
i dont really like some things
1. You contract your knee right after extending it (doesnt looks nice all of the time)
2.All of the openers are overused ones/you didnt made them yourself
3.Your using your hands in an kind of akward way
4.What ever you do DONT RELAX YOUR NECK i made this mistake myself but just hold it allllll the time only when you need to extend/contract it use it by contracting/extending it, and then just keep it like that till you really need to do that again
1. It really only looks bad if you contract extend withing a ~2 frame timeframe
2. Pretty sure I haven't seen some of these openers, while basic, they are still original.
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4. I guess this is generally good practice but for example I never hold my neck unless I somehow held it unintentionally. It is not a hassle and I prefer the bobblehead thing
Kozmo, while these replays are basic, you are showing signs of understanding replaymaking, your movement is pretty alright, you aren't extremely twitchy. Butterfly effect was actually pretty nice.
Keep on keeping on mang.