The fringe on the first one, while very generic, is done brilliantly.
the tribal work is very average in terms of shape and flow and consistancy.
the legs of the first one look empty compared to the arms.
biceps on the second one are straight lines while the rest are curves.
head on the second one is horrible. the interesting part of the hair is hidden by the eyes, which are very average.
torso textures and hands havent been given much thought as to how they map.
the hands only map on the front, then its just empty colour. no mapping the fingers on the sides. random blob on the top of the second one, lazy mapping on the first one etc.
same torso textures on the first one and your personal set, second one is better tho.
Overall: theyr not bad, youre just being lazy with the details, and your tribal work could do with some work.
very similar to mramas work, which was the aim, but mrama inspiration could be taken less literally.
i think you could do so much better by using the natural lines from the first sets hair.