Work on the story and try to pronounce the word in real life make it easy for a regular person to read
Like the poem stopping by the woods on a snowy evening. work on the rhymes
try not the use near rhymes but actual rhymes
and try to think of what rhyme order do you want like
the Poem Daffodils , Miller of the dee , Neem Tree and ETC
Oh and try to write a story like King bruce and the spider or casabianca

the 2nd stanza
Search for him , an impossible Task
Among the bodies a snowy mask
The Limited strength , a boost of hate
Unprepared for Inevitable fate

First Stanza was a bit hard to write since i couldn't find a melody in it
The Crashing dunes blew in despise
Explosions, I had to improvise

Half buried i Find , him in the sand
The gun still gripping in his right hand
Grabbing the M1 not anymore
It was more than hate, more than war

The first one lost second one saved
Is what the tombstone had engraved.
Peace
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and btw the size doesn't matter look at the poem voice of god
I sought to hear the voice of god
i climbed the top most steepl

but god declared go down again
i dwell among the people