Kay, so i did some progress of my own here but i'll throw my vision here for sharing/editing ;d We can pretty much continue the story, but fl0wers still gotta do their char's. I figured i'd leave that up to you guys to settle. Once that's done it will be significantly easier to progress through the story. I extra left Fish's character open for everyone ;d, he'll be the evil boss to fight then.
I divided the story into three episodes, each episode carrying certain chapters. With snake's raw draft, i was able to figure out the first one, since well, it's the simplest. We can all decide what comes after. I was trying to keep a fine line from being too serious or nonsensical, that doesn't mean we can't include anything hilarious,drama etc, by all means, please. Should be good enough to work with.
I know at certain parts i might've gone too much into detail, but bleh i'm doing this for the first time and i got real hooked ;d also i figured if Bojan's doing the comic, he could put all that detail to use. I'll c/p this stuff here, add your own editions in posts or idk.
FLORA Main storyline //// use the character list for help
EPISODE I: "Birth of the fellowship"
Chapter 1a: World intro mixed with snake traveling/fighting etc
Chapters (char. names): Snake finds his companions through all kinds of different situations, who later choose to follow him, may be for varying reasons and whatnot.
Chapter 1b: Meanwhile, a new environment. k6vamees begins to travel/fights etc. descriptions.
Chapters (char. names): k6vamees finds his companions through all kinds of different situations, who later choose to follow him, may be for varying reasons and whatnot. Runs in parallel with snake's story.
Chapter 2: RA and fl0w first encounter*
* At this point we can create a conflict or not between the two factions if we want before or once they meet each other, or have Fish involved with it. Idk, We'll see///
Chapter 2a: RA and fl0w part ways/or join up
EPISODE II: "???"
* We can create another sideline here starting from enemy boss's perspective (running in parallel with Ep. I) leading up to his first appearance in the storyline.
EPISODE III / FINALE: "???"
* Some epic bloody final battle with enemy boss, end in victory, world is saved blablabla
11 heroic characters + 1 enemy boss ///////////// Descriptions are mostly for bojan so it's easier for him to make comics and stuff. Some of it can be used right in the story.
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fl0w: (prolly should be done by fl0wers ;d including snake)
SNAKE-
Appearance: Worn-out appearance, unshaven and gaunt-like look. Wears an old duster coat, a bandana and an eyepatch. Equipped with a Bowie knife and a rucksack filled with illegal tentacle porn.
Origin/Lore: Rebel soldier. Long servitude in the military service until he went rogue after an uprising that had occured among his fellow gay soldiers. Crazy-man lover, likes meatballs.
Zone: Jungle, as explained in the beginning.
WILLIAM-
Appearance:
Origin/Lore:
Zone:
DEPRAV-
Appearance:
Origin/Lore:
Zone:
DEUTERIA-
Appearance:
Origin/Lore:
Zone:
SMOGARD49-
Appearance:
Origin/Lore:
Zone:
"i am surrounded by primitives :("(javik from ME3) thought it would fit his personality ;d
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BOJAN-
Appearance:
Origin/Lore:
Zone:
prolly should be done by bojan himself if he's making the comic or if he wants to appear in the first place.
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RA:
K6VAMEES-
Appearance: to be done
Origin/Lore: to be done
Zone: to be done, but it runs in parallel with snake's beginning til both factions meet.
RCAREY-
Appearance: Turtle-ish (like TMNT if need be), green skin colour. Looks fit, not too slim nor big (lol). Wears a shiny protective shell as armor. Glowy white eyes. Not much else at this point.
Origin/Lore: Stranded ninja turtle trained in the arts of wushu. Jolly personality, kind-hearted. Loner until joining the Companionship, from distant aquatic*? lands. Tech-wiz, likes rainbows and other turtles.
Zone: Swamp; can be explained further in the story
SLYCOOPER-
Appearance: A raccoon creature. Wears blue jacket and a hat. Agile and slim. Equipped with a golden (possibly stolen) watch and a golden sickle-cain*? that he uses to club some heads if necessary. Has a small backpack filled with all sorts of weird tools and doodles. [http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xge7NX9ck1Y/UPQqe_koYNI/AAAAAAAABJY/1c42HBDh6sI/s1600/182793-sly_cooper.jpg]
Origin/Lore: Sarcastic, but capable. Shady thief, also tends to be lazier when it comes bigger heists (lolololol sly). Ultimate sneaker, often moves around like a ghost. Grew alone in an urban environment. Having to survive, he developed several skills like lockpicking and a fast-hand at relieving his targets of valuable possessions. Handy thief/stealth guy, likes gold stuff and valuables. "Yall niggas gay"
Zone: Urban city; can be explained further in the story
KICKASS -
Appearance: Big walking, chubby watermelonish character. Heavy class. Has a thick cowboy moustache and aviator glasses. Wears a dirty white-top and torn jeans. Also wears a belt with several packs filled with marijuana. Has "4:20" largely tattooed on his back. Carries no weapons or other artifacts, he's a big smoking melee giant after all ;d. HULKSMASH!!1
Origin/Lore: Intelligent for a smashing brute. Chilled out personality (like stoner stanley meme) thanks to the drugs he carries. He is of course addicted to them, his stoned state is the only thing preventing him from going mad-rage berserker. He did security as a job but got fired for rage outbursts. He was later captured by a group of mad scientists who wanted to test his essence. Personality, if stoned (casual state) happy and jolly; ub3r pissed off if not stoned (like goliaths from "borderlands" game). Likes plants and philosophy.
Zone: He is held in some whack-ass stasis pod in some strange fruitshop until the Companionship discovers him and frees him from his imprisonment.
KILLER3366-
Appearance: Demonic creature. Werewolvish, strong body build, darkish black thick skin, has only one large eye. A pure predator really. No weapons, has claws and deadly skills in murder.
Origin/Lore: He was summoned during a satanistic ritual by a chef, to use him as a cooking assistant. However the summoners ritual went wrong somehow, the chef was confused and wasn't able to control the creature. Having killed the chef, the creature wandered on out of the sight of common folk and people. He became a vicious, deadly predator with sharp senses. Capable of tracking his prey and taking it down mercilessly in a matter of seconds. Likes murder and cooking food.
Zone: Dark/Dead woods; can be explained further in the story
XHIBA-
Appearance: Mad pumpkin assassin. Equipped with just a sword. Lots of battle scars, wears a black coolie hat [http://jas-townsend.com/images/large/hb-902.jpg] and long rain coat. Else can be taken from his set.
Origin/Lore: A life-long death-dealer for hire with supernatural capabilities and combat practice. Trained in the secret and long forgotten order of Hungra since he was a child. His finesse is unmatched. Likes tattoos, sharks, murder-death and to sharpen his sword. Hates halloween jokes.
Zone: Meh, fuck if i know, i'm running out of ideas.
Enemy:
FISH(Y)
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some other common enemy, purely fictional to avoid hurting feelings.
Last edited by k6vamees; Apr 19, 2013 at 03:07 PM.
Reason: editions to char list
