Hey guys this is a new vid i've made

well not new is actually like 2-3 months old i actually never get to finish it
until today

here's the final product of the vid i think i did pretty good

What do u guys think?
comment (easy with them plz)
Rate (?/10 << Captain duh)
Tips (what do i need to improve on)
Enjoy (i have rly nothing to say here just enjoy )